Continuance

we become, 2010 Artist  Catalina Ouyang

we become, 2010 Artist
Catalina Ouyang

Continuance

I haven’t walked on the edge of your breath for eons,
then, again it’s been a century since,
I heard your voice;
a decade, or more lost in an eternity —
drifting farther on rippling waters,
from oceans through streams,
leaving millennium imprints,
from here to infinity,
a lasting sunset that never rose,
and dangled between that sunrise
without a single lapse of time;
I haven’t lost that last breath of yours —
a tiny vapor that resides in the bottom of my left lung,
once in an era, it slips passed in a hiccup,
pricking straight into my heart’s memory

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Sharing the twistings, and musings that twirl in my mind. Hoping others can relate, or at least enjoy... To know more about me personally you can visit my website at Mind Retrofit.
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6 Responses to Continuance

  1. K. A. Brace says:

    Very good write, great read. >KB

  2. louiville says:

    I love the use of eternal images that reflect the title i.e. sunset, breath and water. However with breath being the odd one out it symbolizes the end, which also weakens the eternal link of sun and water. Been away for a while, but been a pleasure to keep an eye on your wonderful work.

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