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Night cried into the

saltiness of Ocean’s waves;

drowning out Moon’s lust-

er that lingered far, far a –

way; an eclipsing shadow

thrust crashing whirls of sorrow,

stinging fog coated eyes – staled

while a desert stood silent,

whimpering for lost time


700th post! Woot!


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Sharing the twistings, and musings that twirl in my mind. Hoping others can relate, or at least enjoy... To know more about me personally you can visit my website at Mind Retrofit.
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19 Responses to Vanished

  1. notmygrandma says:

    Congrats on the 700th! That’s a lot of musings! πŸ™‚

  2. Love it and woot indeed!! 700th

  3. Cat says:

    Lovely words and what an amazing pic! Wow 700th….congrats!

  4. donrobbins4 says:

    Could you rewrite this work and go more into depth in the version of the original. I would really enjoy viewing the work. Thank you.

  5. claudia says:

    cool – nice mystical feel in this… and wow… congrats on no. 700 – that’s awesome

  6. louiville says:

    This gives off feeling of the earth’s and beyond elements naturally stalking us. And considering we all eventually vanish is both haunting and true.

    • Yes! I like that! It’s like an eery kind of lurking about of nature and such … during fall the sky, moon, stars, sun, nature in general has a different feel to me. It’s like we are all part of their movie – last night I said, “this time of year always makes me feel like I am in The Truman Show or something” have you seen that movie?

      • louiville says:

        That is one film I have not got round to see yet. Your poem reminded me of something I wrote about the large moon in my last book. Your take on nature and the universe always fascinates.

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