Impact
kissing rain – {scarred mouth}
center of a tornado,
catastrophically
penetrated reminders
of the first time our lips; touched
Impact
kissing rain – {scarred mouth}
center of a tornado,
catastrophically
penetrated reminders
of the first time our lips; touched
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Thank you!
You are welcome 😀 😀
Powerful!!!
Woot! Love that, thank you Kimberly!
That says so much in a few words! Wow!
Thank you Zoe! I am working on my editing skills. 😀
this reminds me of him! a catastrophe that I wish now I would have avoided.
Sometimes those types of catastrophes cannot be avoided, they bring so much creativity to the surface that otherwise may never have been stirred … well that is what I tell myself. 😉
Intense poem! and very creative.
Thank you Charlie!
This is great. Short yet strong.
Thank you!
exrtremely powerful
Thank you Cat! It felt empowering – I think I released some past hindrances with that one … we’ll see. 🙂
Did you take this photo? It’s outstanding!!