It’s Universal


It’s Universalย 

i wake at the crack,
a noonday sun,
fiery flesh exposed,
Jupiter’s glare,
nakedly prancing my thoughts –


to you[ALL]
i stare.
blankly at a white screen,
while my mind collides within itself –
collapsed in longings
searching for passions,
dwelling on staleness
overcome by the tortures,
of others~fused~with my own

{my own escapism}
i live to see,
a visit from a Friend,
who is centuries gone,
infused into my ether

daily, i read of others lives
my eyes burn,
their words make me fall in Love,
when all else has failed,
to keep my faith –
they fill this shallow shell
and i am pleased,
to see my Friend
(unknown friends)

About mindretrofit8

Sharing the twistings, and musings that twirl in my mind. Hoping others can relate, or at least enjoy... To know more about me personally you can visit my website at Mind Retrofit.
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16 Responses to It’s Universal

  1. You have an element that is so purely scientific and so brilliantly understandable of our cosmos.

    Molding the fiery galaxies that are connecting mankind with the possibilities of the future of human evolution. ๐Ÿ™‚

    Excellent poem.


  2. and we are pleased to see you and read your work! xo

    • Thank you BTM! I am still quite the dizzy character though. I have to keep taking computer breaks. ๐Ÿ˜ฆ I did get to spin last night, but today I had to take a workout day off in hopes of getting back to it tomorrow. I hope! I want to try week four of Insanity! ๐Ÿ˜‰

      • Vertigo is brutal!! Oh my you want to start at week 4 with Insanity??

        There is a spin instructor in the video who has done it more than once and still struggles! I wouldn’t suggest you start at week 4!

        I hope you’re feeling better sooner than later! xo

      • Oh, no I would not start at week four. Now that is insane! ๐Ÿ˜‰ I have been doing the other weeks with people doing them on youtube. I am at week four, but now I am behind because of my vertigo. I have rested two days so I hope I can start back up by Friday tomorrow I have piloxing so I will not push it. ๐Ÿ™‚

      • ohhh okay i get it, sorry i forgot that you had been doing it, and you do other stuff on top of it? wow!

  3. 1@1!Wow!1 Abeautiful display of fireworks ofminds !1! Love You! Universalfriend(s)!

  4. louiville says:

    While my mind collides with itself is the key the stanza in this poem. That action reflects both the metaphor and the actual poetic process. A wondorous journey portrayed to make one think universally.

    • Yay! louiville, I was hoping to capture that metaphoric feel through word and bring feelings of universal oneness. I am not sure I actually captured all that I felt, but I had fun swooping these words out from mind to fingers. ๐Ÿ™‚

  5. you captured the ‘oneness’, the universality of it all to perfection, ty. and now i will violate my own rule on ‘self advertising’ and ask you to please read what i wrote on this very matter, so sorry, not sure how else to do this.

    • Thank you whocouldknowthen!

      I too try not to “self-advertise,” but sometimes words MUST be shared. I appreciate you sharing and I will go have a read. ๐Ÿ™‚

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