Attention To Details


Attention To Details

a time ago, the year before,
but not quite so, i noticed;
noticed, a sliver of a thread,
obnoxiously hidden, behind that,
this and that –
no formal space was explained,
never the less, it stood out,
rather obtrusively in my glare,
a dainty yellow fray,
about 12 feet from my peripheral,
blazing strands of whatnot,
it was that same year,
that stretched into about 222 –
when red burst through,
my two suns,
the two, i say
those two watched over me,
as i sucked in as much air –
my lungs could hold,
eyes transfixed on that brazen thread,
they (2(22) suns) still – watched;
and i blew out until i started to cough,
i had nothing left,
i gasped in shakes,
gulped in as by breasts heaved,
nearly hyperventilating –
silently, i heard the yellow dear;
stream out in a smile of recognition

About mindretrofit8

Sharing the twistings, and musings that twirl in my mind. Hoping others can relate, or at least enjoy... To know more about me personally you can visit my website at Mind Retrofit.
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10 Responses to Attention To Details

  1. Still need that autograph!! Amazing! xo

  2. invisibleme says:

    Brilliant! I want both your autograph aNd BTM’s!!!

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