Hiding In Constellations
crackling breeze revived,
vivid dreams living lucidly
through rolling thunder –
pounding past’s thrust,
upon a single rose petal;
floating gallantly on whirls of air
luminous brown dirt caught a ride
down the green grass valley
bolts shook the interior
of a mortal[fast asleep]
eyes were open, surged on the sun
in hopes to burn something; awake
rain splattered a rainbow’s kiss,
on heavy rocks below
a vibrant moon tore open night’s sky
revealing everything hidden
a form stood in shadow’s haze
strangely familiar –
completely known(AND unknown)
waves brash’ed, corroding dead skin;
abrasive and celestial thoughts,
all scooped into the eyes of Constellations
Well this wasn’t dull or trapped! Wow !
Thank you BTM! Your comment made me smile! 😀
you’re very welcome! 🙂
Wonderfull read, as always!
Thank you Oloriel!
they (the constellations) do see everything! they have the perfect seats in the house:)
Right, Kimberly? Sometimes I wish I could climb up there and have a gander at all the goings on, but then again I think I would be overwhelmed with what the constellations get to see. 🙂
oui, oui I am Kimberly:) It’s kinda funny, i have bee immersed in writing a poem about what the moon sees from high above. It has been cooking for a few days now, not quite ready to serve! i would certainly get overwhelmed – however, this would be the one moment in life not to think or worry or anything – just admire the scenery and bask in the glow of the moment!!
Oh, I meant, Right? Kimberly. Ha ha ha See when grammar gets all confused. Lol! I agree it would be a great time to bask and admire! 😀
I enjoy how your imagination is woven into the words…..
It makes me feel SO good to hear that someone enjoys my imagination Rob! Thank you! 🙂
The Words are So beautiful…
Thank you Katie Mia! You are so imaginative and gifted at twining words together in great imagery, your comment makes me feel quite good! 🙂