Hiding In Constellations


Hiding In Constellations 

crackling breeze revived,
vivid dreams living lucidly
through rolling thunder –
lightening flares!

pounding past’s thrust,
upon a single rose petal;
floating gallantly on whirls of air

luminous brown dirt caught a ride
down the green grass valley
bolts shook the interior
of a mortal[fast asleep]
eyes were open, surged on the sun
in hopes to burn something; awake

rain splattered a rainbow’s kiss,
on heavy rocks below
a vibrant moon tore open night’s sky
revealing everything hidden


a form stood in shadow’s haze
strangely familiar –
completely known(AND unknown)
waves brash’ed, corroding dead skin;
abrasive and celestial thoughts,
all scooped into the eyes of Constellations


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Sharing the twistings, and musings that twirl in my mind. Hoping others can relate, or at least enjoy... To know more about me personally you can visit my website at Mind Retrofit.
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13 Responses to Hiding In Constellations

  1. Well this wasn’t dull or trapped! Wow !

  2. Oloriel says:

    Wonderfull read, as always!

  3. words4jp says:

    they (the constellations) do see everything! they have the perfect seats in the house:)

    • Right, Kimberly? Sometimes I wish I could climb up there and have a gander at all the goings on, but then again I think I would be overwhelmed with what the constellations get to see. 🙂

      • words4jp says:

        oui, oui I am Kimberly:) It’s kinda funny, i have bee immersed in writing a poem about what the moon sees from high above. It has been cooking for a few days now, not quite ready to serve! i would certainly get overwhelmed – however, this would be the one moment in life not to think or worry or anything – just admire the scenery and bask in the glow of the moment!!

      • Oh, I meant, Right? Kimberly. Ha ha ha See when grammar gets all confused. Lol! I agree it would be a great time to bask and admire! 😀

  4. Rob Taylor says:

    I enjoy how your imagination is woven into the words…..

  5. Katie Mia says:

    The Words are So beautiful…

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