Trenchant Break

MandyTsung3

Trenchant Break 

what once brought breath in-

to me; now suffocates, still

I am not broken

~

once, I saw the life,

that could have been, yet it ’twas

 all fantastical

~

twice, I believed in

romancing a soul, until

you left, {one} last time

~

never, shall I fall

again into illusions

of a collapsing

~

(lung) vaguely revived

excruciating as it

may be; I do breathe

About mindretrofit8

Sharing the twistings, and musings that twirl in my mind. Hoping others can relate, or at least enjoy... To know more about me personally you can visit my website at Mind Retrofit.
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8 Responses to Trenchant Break

  1. Natalya says:

    Beautiful!

  2. Tiffany Coffman says:

    Such a powerful piece! Really loved this one. This really speaks to me on so many levels. Those blessed fairy tale fantasies get us every time, don’t they?

  3. You never cease to amaze me!

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