Gobbled The Sun
I gobbled up the,
sun; to swallow down fear –
entrails erupted;
cataclysmic darkness pierced,
then, validity became …
Luminous!
Shine on, said Darkness,
as it twisted transparently,
Shout out, said the Sun,
as I drank its liquidy truth –
the Golden Ratio,
spiraled infinite stairs,
and on that mourn;
I remembered my name
I watched it unfurl;
into a sunspot’s pool,
I gulped –
absorbed the mirror of the Moon,
blared into a satellite of my own,
covered in craters,
along with quintessential undoings;
eating my way to supernovic,
supersonic, echotonic vibrations
blasting my fears into purposeful –
directions
hiding within the chambers –
between my chest,
roping to the walls;
deep inside my mind
waiting to consume the sun,
escalating rebellion;
explode fears!
(that) shriek against the skull –
leaving scars with tattered stitches …
a revolt!
boiled away confuting pathways;
I devoured it all, imploding –
galactic taste buds,
exploring a mind shift
Bravo! Utterly fantastic…Thank YOU! 😍
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this is written very well. i enjoyed reading it!
Thank you Muse Writer! I am so glad you enjoyed it!
Beautiful Poem aboslutely beautiful
Thank you Ajaytao2010!
you poetry is exceptional I had to refer to the dictionary for some words as I am not so literary, but I do have a sense of poetry as I write in my own language
I feel you are among the best of poets on the blogosphere
I have written a few on my blog in the category “Ajaytao wrote” although the language is not upto to any standards on the literary sense but I would like you to refer to them in your free time please
thank you please bear with my language