Solitarily {Surrounded}


Solitarily {Surrounded} 

desperation overflows –
isolation; faithful pal
only candle’s light
wakes this wax-burned flesh

reassurance there is life –
still breathed,
in silent dark;thick and fogged,
my voice rings out to you

then, wailing just a little longer –
a transparent heart pours;still!
is there one to catch the flood?

has there ever been anyone there,
to count these tears?
or danced to save this soul;
a no one, who has twirled –
heard hidden sounds?

eclipsed through,to help
make it to daybreak?
it feels alone-
surrounded by multitudes

if it were possible,
I’d share all my thoughts with you,
but in losing faith;{reality}
it seems not one you can be found

(I ache to hear cryptic clangs,
even! in secretive restraint,
I’d hear the hush –
ripple of quietude,
gently encased between my eyes,
my words quarantined for you.)

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Sharing the twistings, and musings that twirl in my mind. Hoping others can relate, or at least enjoy... To know more about me personally you can visit my website at Mind Retrofit.
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6 Responses to Solitarily {Surrounded}

  1. jussaraluna says:

    Hello Angel ,
    So beautiful and deep post!
    hugs to you :))

    • Hi Jussara!

      Thank you so much!There is much wrapped into this poem, it felt like a peaceful release as the words came out. Receiving hugs and sending some back! 🙂

      • jussaraluna says:

        Hello Angel, you’re welcome!
        I like your poems and images, your style is great,
        very talented :))
        Thank you for your nice comment on my post (Godot )
        I’m so glad that you enjoyed it.
        I wish you a happy 2013!
        My English is not good…sorry!
        hugs to you :))

      • Hi Jussara,

        I appreciate your comments very much. They keep me motivated!

        I understand your English just fine. 🙂

        I wish you a Happy New Year too! Yay! 2013!

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