jump right out in blasting force –
someone please take notice!
limping on these tattered bones,
the only one who hears –
clanking metal,
a skeleton sucked dry
shriveled skin and hollowed eyes,
digging cones of color,
sparkled out in rising glow –
hoping to be seen

quietly disappear,
solitude of sunken breath –
repeatedly stolen

tears of waterfalls,
and rushing rivers cannot be counted,
mountaintops hold close –
frozen in time,
for a moment they are stilled;
collected before they reach the sky

sadness pours within each cell,
tortured and lonely,
all is well
cried night falling into day,
while the creatures watched,
and suddenly it was known –
magnificent visibility

About mindretrofit8

Sharing the twistings, and musings that twirl in my mind. Hoping others can relate, or at least enjoy... To know more about me personally you can visit my website at Mind Retrofit.
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4 Responses to Seen

  1. prewitt1970 says:

    Solitude of sunken breath- Lovely this piece is sad, passionate, lonely and calling. I love it!!

  2. The forces of solitude have join our noises by the hanging touch of our cells buzzing for hope. 🙂

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