Of Love & Loss
pinprick; thorns tangle
pointy raindrops drizzle
spiky rainbows pierce –
assaulted by the brilliance of color,
psychedelic pique raging –
in pounding clouds,
falling into the absolute,
wonderment of love,
and paroxysm of its loss
Sharing the twistings, and musings that twirl in my mind. Hoping others can relate, or at least enjoy... To know more about me personally you can visit my website at Mind Retrofit.
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One of the things that I like about your writing style is you write from the head mixed with the heart.
That is awesome to hear Benjamin! I often wonder how my words translate to others. I am unsure most of the time. This is great to know. Thank you!
Each line is love. Each line is loss. Each line is BOTH! Amazing!
Hi Memoirs of a Dragon! Thank you so much! I tried to capture my love/loss feeling with my words. 🙂
Hey, I remembered a video that I was consumed with over and over last year as well. I thought you may enjoy it too. Maybe you have seen it, but it is always worth sharing . Hee hee http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=kkGeOWYOFoA
I had not seen that before! Thank you! Simply…the best visualization of Fibonacci Numbers (and more!), I have ever seen! Loved it all and my favourite part is with the … Dragonfly!
Oh, good! I am glad you liked it. I loved the dragonfly too. 🙂 I just mentioned you as my inspiration for my latest poem. I shared a Fib poem.
Thank you! And I am toying with more ‘Fibs’ and ..others!
Just mentioned you in my latest ‘Fib’!
How grand! I will pop over and take a look. 🙂 I must say this has been quite fun and has stirred some tucked away poetic passions. How could I leave my numbers? Oh, the treachery! Hee hee
The Treachery of Numbers! What a great title! I am discovering more forms of math/poetry and … having fun! This is all new to me, this writing ‘stuff’!
Memoirs of a Dragon I had not thought about it, but you are right that makes a great title! I do enjoy that different types of math/poetry. I only started playing with them last year, but stopped many of my attempts or have not shared because I am unsure of them. However, I think I may start sharing them if I attempt them just because. It is always good to push oneself – I am still trying to break out of my “shy shell.” 🙂
Share them …when you are ready! And remember – I am the one who holds copyright on being ‘shy’!
Memoirs of a Dragon you rock! 🙂 As much as I try to overcome my shyness some days it still overcomes me, but I will honor your copyright. Hee hee
Enjoyed your word choices in this one, thank you 🙂
So glad you enjoyed these words Zen and Genki! They were really fun to twist and bend together. 🙂