Please, A Whistle

Please, A Whistle

a whistle?
send a whistle,
through amorphous ways
gossamer films coating my ears
covering a withering heart

a whistle?
some sweet sound from your lips?
I ask for no more words –
your delicious words
sitting in wells
have they vanished?
gas swarming my air
are they still there?
were they ever?

a whistle?
some finespun tune
chirping from the beak
a dainty little bird
could you send him?
I’ll sit at my window –
an eternity

a whistle?
come to me aromatic blooms
a rush of air,
let me know you are there
if you have gone…
je t’en prie do not linger me on
whistle your good-bye
so I can keep it close –
a flute wrapping joy,
to remind me evermore

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Sharing the twistings, and musings that twirl in my mind. Hoping others can relate, or at least enjoy... To know more about me personally you can visit my website at Mind Retrofit.
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8 Responses to Please, A Whistle

  1. ~Lady Day says:

    this is lovely…evermore is a favoured word of mine. It really is beautiful Angel, and the sentiment, I totally get. Yet again. xo

  2. Angel says:

    Thank you Lady Day! “Evermore” is one of mine as well, from my favorite “The Raven.” Ahhh, if only I could hear a whistle… funny this morning there was a crow outside my kitchen window. I giggled. Hee hee

  3. ~Lady Day says:

    I am giggling too…’the raven’ …such an amazing piece of writing…the formatting of ‘evermore’ quite inspiring…you are a sweetheart. we are a tad joined at the soul I think… Always amazing. Have I ever mentioned…I homeschooled my many children for five years..lol.Hugs to you dear. Hope your day goes well.

    • Angel says:

      Lady Day! Homeschooled too! Well, it seems our paths were meant to cross at this moment in time for some “evermore” reason. Lol! Ok, I admit I really wanted to say evermore again. 🙂 Tad joined indeed… indeed and clever are two other words I enjoy quite often. Hee hee

      • ~Lady Day says:

        lol…funny. Well…I’m honoured to read your writing…it is a treasure, now all mine of school age are in school…thank goodness. It was awesome but the hardest thing I’d ever done…indeed. Stay well Angel. Look forward to your next stunning creation.Mwah!

      • ~Lady Day says:

        lol…funny. Well…I’m honoured to read your writing…it is a treasure, now all mine of school age are in school…thank goodness. It was awesome but the hardest thing I’d ever done…indeed. Stay well Angel. Look forward to your next stunning creation.Mwah!

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