Breathe In

Breathe In

Can I climb into your chest,
nuzzle myself into your heart valves?
I do ask to flow in all directions,
through your veins.

Pumping, thriving in your streams,
leaving residue of me.
Supernatural platelets,
carving out my design,
reassurance that you cannot shake me.

Tattooed in each cell,
tapping your blood vessels,
lingering imprints,
leaving my mark,
fluttering remembrance,
with each passing nutrient,
cascading oxygen,
I breathe in you.

(Intro to my story Behind the Yellow Door from my Unpegging Retro blog)


About mindretrofit8

Sharing the twistings, and musings that twirl in my mind. Hoping others can relate, or at least enjoy... To know more about me personally you can visit my website at Mind Retrofit.
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9 Responses to Breathe In

  1. seventhvoice says:

    What an absolutely spectacular poem…. Your mind is truly amazing Angel = )

  2. David says:

    You dig deep…into the cellular level of emotion…love it

  3. melodylowes says:

    Stunning words to complement stunning image. Well-done!

  4. melodylowes says:

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