Autonomous

Posted on February 17, 2013 by mindretrofit8

Autonomous

distant beating – drum;

lyrical dance upon sweet

dreams, fantastical -

waiting for freedom to make

chained feet leap! unbound {the mind…}

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Sharing the twistings, and musings that twirl in my mind. Hoping others can relate, or at least enjoy... To know more about me personally you can visit my website at Mind Retrofit.

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10 Responses to Autonomous

prewitt1970 says:

February 17, 2013 at 7:17 pm

Question:? Do I get air miles for the beautiful
Journeys you take me on. But really wonderful imagery.
Benjamin

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- mindretrofit8 says:
  
  February 17, 2013 at 7:19 pm
  
  I wish I could give air miles! What a great comment thank you, Benjamin!
  
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  - prewitt1970 says:
    
    February 17, 2013 at 7:26 pm
    
    Well your amazing its hard not to compliment
  - mindretrofit8 says:
    
    February 17, 2013 at 7:28 pm
    
    Thank you!
quirkyandlaughing says:

February 17, 2013 at 8:42 pm

It’s been forever since I’ve been in the blogosphere. It’s great to see that you’re still at it – your writing is still exquisite!

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- mindretrofit8 says:
  
  February 18, 2013 at 7:56 am
  
  Thank you so much Quirky! So good to “see” you!
  
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  - quirkyandlaughing says:
    
    February 19, 2013 at 8:32 pm
    
    Good to “see” you again, too!
  - mindretrofit8 says:
    
    February 19, 2013 at 8:49 pm
jussaraluna says:

February 18, 2013 at 11:45 pm

Hello dear Angel,
So beautiful picture and great poem! I love this post!
hugs and hugs across the oceans ) Jussy

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- mindretrofit8 says:
  
  February 19, 2013 at 7:50 pm
  
  Hello Jussy!! It makes me real big that you enjoyed this so much! Receiving all the hugs and ~~~~ sending some back my friend.
  
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