Dancing In The Sun
dancing with the fire -
rolling partner, the Sun,
feet smelt into flipping flames
arms spread through flaring whisks,
bright strands; smoldering to escape
consumed within raging heat,
bursting star, engulfs -
such pleasures
swallowed whole in Sun’s caress,
melting, as one; magnetic field
hot plasma interwoven
we sink, twined through the sounds,
vibrations of a universal song
Sun and I dance – away,
while the earth spins by
(I rewrote this a bit, original is here.)
Lovely piece of writing.
Thanks so much Benjamin! Love your new page on your blog!
not to spicy?
I think we need a little more spice! I thought it was great. I have not had the “guts” to share my more lively words. I think you should go with what you feel and let us enjoy the ride with you!