Phantasm
truth? far worse than, fant-
asy, leaving the heart to,
wander make-believe
mirage? far better
than, veracity – clearly;
not so, however,
one must peel off phant-
asm, (alone) while clouded
eyes watch, jealously
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Brilliant
Awesome! Thank you Benjamin!
one must peel off phant-
asm, (alone) while clouded
eyes watch, jealously
Holy-snaps! This is the must beautiful and creative thing I have ever read. You and I are so much alike in being such creative space-aliens from another planet.
Great job on this wonderful write. 
Why thank you Charlie! “Holy-snaps!” That is awesome, I am so borrowing it.
It is such a grand thing to find fellow space-aliens! I am sure you will help peel some layers with yours words today. I am not able to check and see if you have published yet. I am quite the busy electron today. I will later though, yes, indeedy.
Surprise! New poem.
http://charliezero1.wordpress.com/2013/01/07/watching-crows-squirt-yellow-mustard-on-those-lollipop-anorexic-holocausts/
Your poem is fantastic, Angel ! !
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Thank you Jussara!